LO4: Drafts of film trailer

First Draft



Pros:

• First person used to create atmosphere
• Titles used effectively 
• Fades used as transitions to create tension

Cons:

• No full scale editing yet done
• Too short 
• Audio needs re-recording

Second Draft



Pros:

• Editing correctly used to simulate different times of day.
• Jump cutting used correctly.
• Music creates tension

Cons:

• Meteor not added
• White eyes not added
• Alistair's (James) voice needs re-recording

Third Draft




Pros:

• Meteor and white eyes added showing progression
• Alistair (James)'s voice removed
• Clips sync with music at most points, creating great effect

Cons:

• Green intro needs to be removed
• Too linear for a film trailer